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Writing Tips

Words to Avoid

This does not include dialogue.

These can be used (of course, it’s your writing!) just try to make sure they are not overused.

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↳ tell & don’t show

➳ telling words force the reader away from the story; showing immerses them

➝ consider

➝ decide

➝ feel / felt

➝ got

➝ has / have / had

➝ hear / heard

➝ is / are / was / were / am

➝ look

➝ next

➝ notice

➝ ponder

➝ recall

➝ remember

➝ see / saw

➝ smell

➝ taste

➝ then

➝ think / thought

➝ watch

➝ wonder

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↳ extra & can be removed

➳ declutter your writing; keeping your story concise holds the attention of the reader better

➝ absolutely

➝ completely

➝ down / up

➝ just

➝ really

➝ totally

➝ very

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↳ vague

➳ don’t make the reader guess what you mean; show them exactly what you’re describing

➝ a little

➝ a lot

➝ about

➝ almost

➝ appear

➝ approximately

➝ few

➝ like

➝ lots

➝ many

➝ might

➝ more

➝ most

➝ much

➝ often

➝ perhaps

➝ rather

➝ roughly

➝ seem

➝ some (somebody, somehow, someone, something, sometime, somewhat, somewhere)

➝ thing

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↳ absolutes

➳ don’t give the reader the opportunity to find discrepancies in your story

➝ absolute

➝ all

➝ always

➝ complete

➝ entire

➝ every (everybody, everyone, everything, every time, everywhere)

➝ never

➝ none

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↳ adverbs

➳ be as concise and meaningful as possible; every word you use should be the ideal descriptor

➝ anything ending in ‘-ly’

➝ if you’re using ‘-ly’ there is a better verb or adjective to use

➝ angrily, quickly, sadly, softly, suddenly, etc.

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↳ continuous action words

➳ these words reduce the sense of urgency; keep your readers hooked by keeping the tension

➝ after

➝ as

➝ continued

➝ when

➝ while

➝ ‘-ing’ verbs

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↳ transitions

➳ transition words allow writers to avoid finding connections between sentences, but meaningful connections increase immersion and flow

➝ after

➝ also

➝ anyway

➝ as

➝ besides

➝ even though

➝ finally

➝ however

➝ later

➝ meanwhile

➝ next

➝ so

➝ soon

➝ then

L + Ratio + The Deviled Eggs are coming for you + Get Good

Why is this blog getting attacked.

Me moment….

I’m about to dive head first into my renaissance girl era. Devouring books, feverishly learning languages, working through my watch list of films and adding entries to my film journal, discovering new music, buying new art supplies and painting more regularly, filming and editing vlogs simply for my own personal consumption without posting them, diving more into the art of cooking and even treating my entire look as an art form. The passion and love and richness of it all. It excites me.

I absolutely agree. People like this are the bane of society and should be killed. Luckily I have brought this to the surface of society even if people won’t listen…

Hey. This is a serious post calling out the behavior in the owls nest discord dedicated to OwlF45’s fanfiction community. Owl is non-participatory in the downfall of this server. They do nothing to moderate this madness and have nothing to do with this server and their crimes aginst humanity.

Tch. Anime profile picture. Degenerate.

Of course one of them have a Tec###ade user

This place is a fucking freak show……

I want to call out this DISGUSTING behavior done by these absolute MONSTERS of society. These scum of the earth are why this server and the WORLD is fucked up. I hope by exposing this evil underbelly of the fanfiction world I can help make the world a better place from FREAK-SHOWS like this…….

Hello. i am back with another call out post of the Owls Circus. the Owls nest has not stopped their wretched behavior so i am once again making a post in hopes we can rid the world of the evil

the mods of the owls nest have started role playing DNF in the general chat….. this is a fanfiction discord….. i hate people……. villians

What?

anyways..

not only have they roleplayed DNF but theyve also begun making the entire server DNF themed….. disgusting…….

thank you for reading my call out post once again about the owls nest. hopefully the unholy who have caused this will stop after this call out post…

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Some smol ones for tonight.

I can’t keep on supporting this………..

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No because pride and prejudice isn't "I changed myself for you so you would love me back." It's "your blatant rejection and disdain for me made me realize things about myself no one had ever been bold enough to tell me so I sat down and evaluated all my behavior patterns and why they came about and came to the realization myself that I had to work on myself. Also I don't expect you to love me now that I'm a work in progress, so I'm just going to do nice things for you because I don't like seeing you hurt." No wonder P&P fans refuse to settle.