Some Smol Ones For Tonight.

THEY BOTH LOOK SO CUTE !!!!! Just two edgy dudes, fabulous, amazing, show stopping,

Ur art is so good btw…… I’m throwing it around and chewing and barking and whateva….

black butler x fma!!

i realized omg theyre like the same size so outfit swap!

L + Ratio + The Deviled Eggs are coming for you + Get Good

Why is this blog getting attacked.

Writing Tips

Words to Avoid

This does not include dialogue.

These can be used (of course, it’s your writing!) just try to make sure they are not overused.

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↳ tell & don’t show

➳ telling words force the reader away from the story; showing immerses them

➝ consider

➝ decide

➝ feel / felt

➝ got

➝ has / have / had

➝ hear / heard

➝ is / are / was / were / am

➝ look

➝ next

➝ notice

➝ ponder

➝ recall

➝ remember

➝ see / saw

➝ smell

➝ taste

➝ then

➝ think / thought

➝ watch

➝ wonder

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↳ extra & can be removed

➳ declutter your writing; keeping your story concise holds the attention of the reader better

➝ absolutely

➝ completely

➝ down / up

➝ just

➝ really

➝ totally

➝ very

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↳ vague

➳ don’t make the reader guess what you mean; show them exactly what you’re describing

➝ a little

➝ a lot

➝ about

➝ almost

➝ appear

➝ approximately

➝ few

➝ like

➝ lots

➝ many

➝ might

➝ more

➝ most

➝ much

➝ often

➝ perhaps

➝ rather

➝ roughly

➝ seem

➝ some (somebody, somehow, someone, something, sometime, somewhat, somewhere)

➝ thing

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↳ absolutes

➳ don’t give the reader the opportunity to find discrepancies in your story

➝ absolute

➝ all

➝ always

➝ complete

➝ entire

➝ every (everybody, everyone, everything, every time, everywhere)

➝ never

➝ none

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↳ adverbs

➳ be as concise and meaningful as possible; every word you use should be the ideal descriptor

➝ anything ending in ‘-ly’

➝ if you’re using ‘-ly’ there is a better verb or adjective to use

➝ angrily, quickly, sadly, softly, suddenly, etc.

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↳ continuous action words

➳ these words reduce the sense of urgency; keep your readers hooked by keeping the tension

➝ after

➝ as

➝ continued

➝ when

➝ while

➝ ‘-ing’ verbs

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↳ transitions

➳ transition words allow writers to avoid finding connections between sentences, but meaningful connections increase immersion and flow

➝ after

➝ also

➝ anyway

➝ as

➝ besides

➝ even though

➝ finally

➝ however

➝ later

➝ meanwhile

➝ next

➝ so

➝ soon

➝ then

Hello. i am back with another call out post of the Owls Circus. the Owls nest has not stopped their wretched behavior so i am once again making a post in hopes we can rid the world of the evil

the mods of the owls nest have started role playing DNF in the general chat….. this is a fanfiction discord….. i hate people……. villians

What?

anyways..

not only have they roleplayed DNF but theyve also begun making the entire server DNF themed….. disgusting…….

thank you for reading my call out post once again about the owls nest. hopefully the unholy who have caused this will stop after this call out post…

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During pride month? pathetic. A boober and an full metal alchemist degenerate. Pfft. go back to twitch and downvoting animes on MAL. freaks.

Hey. This is a serious post calling out the behavior in the owls nest discord dedicated to OwlF45’s fanfiction community. Owl is non-participatory in the downfall of this server. They do nothing to moderate this madness and have nothing to do with this server and their crimes aginst humanity.

Tch. Anime profile picture. Degenerate.

Of course one of them have a Tec###ade user

This place is a fucking freak show……

I want to call out this DISGUSTING behavior done by these absolute MONSTERS of society. These scum of the earth are why this server and the WORLD is fucked up. I hope by exposing this evil underbelly of the fanfiction world I can help make the world a better place from FREAK-SHOWS like this…….

september 8, 2022

YES SHE DID

No because pride and prejudice isn't "I changed myself for you so you would love me back." It's "your blatant rejection and disdain for me made me realize things about myself no one had ever been bold enough to tell me so I sat down and evaluated all my behavior patterns and why they came about and came to the realization myself that I had to work on myself. Also I don't expect you to love me now that I'm a work in progress, so I'm just going to do nice things for you because I don't like seeing you hurt." No wonder P&P fans refuse to settle.

older hdlw doodle dump!!

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