yay it's me (not mario), i'm finally here đ what do you think about sunshine neteyam with grumpy girlfriend and the prompt: "do you always have to be so pessimistic?" and "do you always have to be so damn optimistic?" đ„Ž
lana ily & i love this idea so much!! sunshine neteyam with grumpy reader?? tell me more
pairing ; neteyam x fem!reader
synopsis ; sometimes youâre too pessimistic⊠or maybe neteyam is too optimistic.
themes ; fluff, grumpy!reader & sunshine!neteyam
The rain hadnât let up for hours.
Thick drops fell in a steady rhythm, soaking the forest floor, turning the path back to the village into a slick mess of mud and tangled roots. You huffed, arms crossed as you stood under a broad-leafed tree, watching it pour like the sky had a personal vendetta.
Neteyam, standing beside you, looked unbothered. If anything, he looked cheerful.
You scowled. âYouâre enjoying this.â
He glanced at you, wide grin tugging at his lips. âWhat gave me away?â
âThe smile,â you muttered.
He laughed, light and warm. âCome on, itâs just rain. Kind of peaceful, donât you think?â
You looked at him like heâd grown a second head. âPeaceful? Itâs cold. Itâs wet. And weâre stuck out here with no shelter unless we want to make a mud bed.â
âYou say that like thatâs a bad thing,â he teased, nudging your shoulder with his.
You rolled your eyes, pulling your arms tighter around yourself. âDo you always have to be so damn optimistic?â
Neteyam grinned with a slight shrug, unbothered. âDo you always have to be so pessimistic?â
You glared up at him. âItâs not pessimism â itâs realism. I realistically donât want to freeze to death out here while you hum and pretend the rain is a song from Eywa.â
He laughed again, the sound warm against the chill of the rain. Then he stepped closer, so close you could feel the heat radiating off him. He reached out, brushing a damp strand of hair away from your face with gentle fingers.
âYouâre cute when youâre grumpy,â he said, so softly it almost got lost in the rain.
You blinked. âDonât test me, Neteyam.â
His grin widened. âWhatâre you gonna do? Glare at me until I stop smiling?â
âMaybe.â
âThat hasnât worked yet,â he said smugly.
You huffed again â but your heart was doing traitorous little flips, because no matter how annoying his sunshine attitude was, there was a part of you that liked it, that liked him. The way he always found the light, even when you were sure there wasnât any.
And right now, standing in the rain, miserable and wet and cold, you couldnât help but lean into him just a little.
âFine,â you muttered. âBut if I get sick, Iâm blaming you.â
He wrapped an arm around your shoulders without hesitation, pulling you close.
âDeal,â he said, voice soft. âBut Iâll be the one taking care of you anyway.â
You groaned into his chest, trying to hide the way your face was burning.
Stupid, warm, sunshine boy.
JC Avatar Universe fanfiction - constantly updating (*- longer fics)
I write for Neteyam, Tsu'tey, Ao'nung, open to writing for Lo'ak, Jake
*All For You - Neteyam x Taâunui ! reader / enemies to lovers! - pt. 1 | pt. 2
when Quaritch attacks the Taâunui water clan, Y/N flees to the Metkayina clan for safety. She develops feelings for Neteyam but the tensions grow when Y/N finds out that Neteyam is the son of Jake Sully - the man she hates.
*Be Mine - Neteyam x Metkayina ! reader / fake dating!
the one, where neteyam pretends to court the reader to avoid all of the nagging from his parents and a group of admirers. of course, it doesnât take long for her to fall for him too
Human Stuff - Neteyam x Human ! reader (afab) / period cramps Â
the one, where a confused naâvi teenager tries to comfort his human friend while sheâs on her period
Your lips, my lips, apocalypse - Neteyam x Omatikaya ! reader
when y/n hangs out with the women at the lab and decides to put on lipstick to feel pretty, her friends start to make fun of her. but not neteyam, he thinks she looks cute
*And I cried when you first said, "Oel ngati kameie" - Neteyam x Metkayina ! reader / forbidden love!
despite her fatherâs wariness of the sullyâs and their âdemon-blood,â y/n canât help but feel drawn to neteyam. as the two of them bond over their similar experiences of parental pressure, he finds himself falling in love with her
*Second Chances - Neteyam x Omatikaya ! reader / love triangle!
y/n and lo'ak were destined to be together, or so she thought... after moving to awa'atlu with the sully's, lo'ak starts to fall for a certain metkayina girl, leaving y/n completely heartbroken. it is unexpected when neteyam, who has been secretly harboring feelings for her, decides to tend to her wounds. can y/n reciprocate his love?
Nerves Talking - Neteyam x Crybaby ! reader / misscommunication
after spending months teaching his little sisterâs friend how to hunt, neteyam is surprised by the lack of her progress. later on, he discovers then that she is just too nervous to be around him because of her not-so-small crush
Tunutu (Crush) - Neteyam x Omatikaya ! reader / childhood friends to lovers
although neteyam had never reciprocated her feelings, choosing him was always an easy decision for y/n, one of those she could make in a heartbeat. so when another man tries to win her affections, neteyam suddenly becomes aware of what he has been missing out on
*Chosen by Eywa - Neteyam x Omatikaya ! reader / series (complete)
eywa makes no mistakes... in the midst of his preparation to become the future olo'eyktan, neteyam is told to be with a chosen mate. guided by the signs of eywa, tsahik picks y/n, a woman orphaned by the war, whose heart already belongs to another. y/n's whole world begins to crumble, as she is forced into the loveless bond. will neteyam and y/n be able to overcome the odds and find their true happiness?
Child of Our Own - Tsu'tey x Omatikaya ! reader
seeing his friends already awaiting their firstborns, tsu'tey begins to yearn for a baby of his own, but he is too shy to tell you about it
Unrequited Love - Tsuâtey x Omatikaya ! reader / smut
you had been in love with tsu'tey for as long as you could remember. so when you see his heart break again at the loss of another mate, you offer him comfort, expecting nothing in return
Unrequited - Tsuâtey x Omatikaya ! reader / series (complete)
based on Unrequited Love: y/n had been in love with tsu'tey since they were kids, watching him get his heart broken over and over, until he became hardened. on one particular night, she offers him intimacy with no expectations in return, which sparks up a complex relationship between them. they grapple with guilt, unrequited love, and newfound intimacy, as y/n and tsu'tey navigate the depths of their feelings for each other
Captain Save a Hoe - Tsu'tey x Avatar ! reader
grumpy tsuâtey having to take care of a clumsy avatar!reader, and eventually warming up to her
Let Me Hear My Child - Tsu'tey x Pregnant ! reader / headcanons
tsu'tey's reaction to finding out his mate is pregnant
You'll be a great dad - Tsu'tey x Pregnant ! reader / Tsu'tey x Jake
tsu'tey is overwhelmed with anxiety and fear upon hearing the news of his mate's pregnancy and becoming a father, but like a good friend, jake is there to calm him down
Can't wait to meet you - Tsu'tey x Pregnant ! reader
pregnant!reader having to reassure tsu'tey that he will be a great father, despite his fears
Just Married - Tsu'tey x Female ! mate
when you stepped into the public eye for the first time after your mating, tsu'tey couldn't contain the overflowing affection he held for you. but because you felt insecure about the way you were being perceived by the clan, tsu'tey decided to prove you otherwise
Ao'nung:
Heaven in Hiding - Ao'nung x Metkayina ! reader / secret dating!
ao'nung and you have been hiding your relationship for some time now but there comes a moment when you want more than that
Thinking out loud about avatar (my opinions/analyses/theories):
sully kids watching jake's old diary logs
neteyam taking the move to awa'atlu the best out of the sully's
jake cringing at "my husband was toruk makto" bc of his own insecurities
jake and quaritch making up
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I've fallen ill with sudden temperature, so that's the final piece so sorryđŠ
or "About the beloved son"
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"it is what demon's blood does" on ao3
The same picture.
um,,,, probably sketching won over writing, sorry my darlingsđŠ
this sketch meant to be gore, (and it'll be), but I don't think ppl are ready for that until A3, + I don't know how tumblr reacts on that,,
the fun part is I don't even use references anymore, so sorry for your eyebleeding if you paid attention to anatomy details
heyy i love ur works sm, could u possibly write a fic like the one you wrote about Loâak in Unmoveable, but with Neteyam as the alpha and the reader as the bratty/dominant omega. (Preferably fem reader) Tysm!!
Pairing: Adult Alpha Neteyam x Olangi Princess Omega Reader
Summary: Princess or not, a spoiled brat like you needs to be put in her place. And since you have been given over to him now, Neteyam is more than ready to put that attitude in check.
Warnings: dubcon/noncon, explicit MDNI, aged up Neteyam, omegaverse, dom/sub dynamics. power imbalance, very talkative Neteyam, breast play, nipple clamps, anal, punishment, kidnapping/arranged marriage, swearing, etc.
A/N: Hi anon...you probably thought I was never going to fufill this requestđđ Hopefully you are still online to see this
Adult Neteyam pic by Cinetrix
Unmovable for reference
âWhat are you doing?â
âWaiting.â You reply simply, folding your legs upon where you are perched on a nearby boulder.Â
âIs that so?â One of Neteyamâs hairless brows curves upwards into an unusual expression as he places his hands on his hips. You shrug it off as morphed social skills he has picked up, a consequence of living with Sky People. You donât let it ruffle your feathers.Â
âYes. Soon you will have left and I will finally have some peace before my clan comes to get me.â You supply the information with a tilted chin and confidence oozing from every pore even as the towering alpha closes in on your space.Â
âYour clan has given you to me, princess.âÂ
You refuse to meet the gaze that somehow manages to penetrate your defenses with a heated fire, contrary to his poised posture that emanates a relaxed grace.Â
âAn oversight on their part.â Your fingers interlock together and place on your lap. If he wants to put on a tough bravado why shouldnât you? âOnce they come to realize their mistake they will come to retrieve me. Until then, I wait.âÂ
However, waiting here may take more patience than you care to admit. The Olangi clan are known for their expertise as paâli [direhorse] riders but even they may require a day or so to catch up to the point where Toruk Maktoâs son has dragged you to. It's the furthest you have ever been from home. Consequently the first time you have seen the beautiful rolling grounds of the plains slowly transform into congested forest.Â
You can only see a portion of the sky with these interlocking trees in the way. It pushes in on you like the bars of your enclosure, yet another representation of how trapped you have become in Neteyamâs grip.Â
âIâm waiting too, paskalin [honey].â You shuffle slightly when he comes to sit beside you. The rich essence of his scent wraps around you in a vice-like grip. It has your inner omega running restless but you maintain a serene exterior. It wouldnât be the first time an alpha has tried to rope you into submission with drifting pheromones. âIn fact, we all are waiting.â He gestures to the handful of Omatikaya warriors that have made the journey with him. They pretend to busy themselves with loading up paâli that are already prepared. âWaiting for you to stop this tantrum of yours.âÂ
âTantrum?â The word feels foreign on your tongue.Â
âIt means a child throwing a fit when they do not get their way.âÂ
âI am not a child!â You seethe, lips peeling back to reveal your pointed fangs. âI am a princess and-â
âAnd I am a prince.â Neteyam shrugs, cutting you off. âYet neither of those titles mean anything out here.â
You scoff, allowing your hair to act as a protective curtain from his searing attention. A prince. What a laughable thought. A true prince does not drag a female away from her home with bound wrists and promises of mating. He has no right to call himself such a thing.Â
Then again, your father calls himself Oloâeyktan yet he was the one that handed you over to the alpha. All for the promise of protection against the RDA. The Omatikaya could have asked for anything to seal the alliance between your two clans in battle but all that Neteyam had come to collect was you.Â
Your fatherâs decision, however, could be forgiven in your eyes. He was doing what he thought was best for the people. His greatest error was believing Neteyam would be a suitable mate for you, for thinking that any alpha would be a good match for you after all that youâve expressed against such a union. You are a free spirit. Despite your presentation as an omega you were never meant to live in an alphaâs shadows.Â
âLook at me.â His voice is soft but firm. Another scoff of refusal is traveling up your throat but this time Neteyam doesnât wait for you to follow his command. He captures your chin and forces you to turn and feel the weight of presence. It feels as if his alpha pheromones not only bleed into the space between you but also cinch around your throat like a claws. âI am your alpha now, your mate. That is the only title you should be focused on.âÂ
Neteyam is a strange alpha, that you have come to quickly realize. Where other alphas often raise their voices in demand for respect and submission he delivers his commands in the form of smooth purrs traveling down your spine. He uses force when necessary but never done rashly or out of anger, simply a tool to get you back to where he deems you should be. Among the other males there is no passive aggressive commentary or puffing of chests to remind them of rank.Â
Instead he converses with them as old friends do. He leads the group in every sense of the word but itâs done with almost a playful hand as they laugh and make jokes with one another. And yet, after all of this backwards messaging, there is an air of dominance that laces his every move. He walks and talks with a relaxed expression as if he knows there is no need to prove himself. His supremacy is something that would not dare to be questioned.Â
And somehow that comes off as higher snobbery than any other foolish alpha youâve seen wrestle for your hand.Â
âI donât have an alpha. Nor will I ever.â With a tug your face is whipped from his hold. You manage to conceal the rush of heat to your cheeks by smoothly shifting your hair and facing away from him once more. âI suggest you accept that fact and stop wasting both of our time.â
Not a single bat of your eyes in his direction as you stare confidently ahead at the strange tree in front of you and wait to hear the partyâs retreat. Instead your ears only catch the sound of a small sigh and shuffle before Neteyam is standing before you.Â
âCome now, princess. Itâs been fun but we still have ground to cover.â He reaches his hand out to help you up but you only gamble casting a glance at it from your peripheral vision. As far as you are concerned, Neteyam does not exist in your world. And so you treat him as such.Â
âNeteyam!â A voice bellows across the distance. âWe are losing daylight, brother. Are we set to travel?â
Neteyam doesnât hesitate to send the other male a small smile before saying, âShe is coming along now.â
âNo I am not.â Your instant response is tainted with a gasp of offense. How dare he speak for you! âI am not moving from this rock until my clan comes to get me.â You insist, slapping his hand away.Â
Neteyam remains unperturbed, simply giving a shrug before murmuring, âHave it your way then.âÂ
You arenât afforded a second for a sense of victory to settle in before the prince is tossing you over his shoulder. Strongs arms wrap around the back of your thighs to keep you pinned there and decrease the range of motion for kicking. It doesnât stop the gasp of outrage and pure spite that emanates from you. Limbs swinging in every which direction to deliver damage, you quickly resent the way his strength greatly overpowers your own.Â
âI am not some fresh kill for you to carry home. Set me down right this instant!â
âI gave you the chance to walk over with dignity, princess. What else am I supposed to do?â He tries to retort but you can detect the grin in his voice. Even more humiliating, from your upside down position you are still able to spot the other males squirming to not laugh at your compromising position.Â
âYou are a mongrel of a man!âÂ
The scratchy venom of your tone is morphed into a surprised squeak when you are let back onto your feet. Regardless, you remain trapped in Neteyamâs arms as you are wedged between him and a paâli.Â
âDonât waste your energy, tiyawn [love]. It will be at least a few more days before we reach Omatikaya soil.âÂ
They are surrounding you from every side. The five other males may wear amused expressions and appear to be enraptured in conversations with one another but you are no fool. These men are under Neteyamâs jurisdiction. At the first sign of trouble they will be snapping into action. Running now will only get you dragged back and fighting against Neteyamâs hold may get you flung into a humiliating position again.Â
âAt least let me have my own paâli. I know how to ride.âÂ
Neteyam's chest heaves with the responding laugh that awakens within him. White pearly teeth on display, his amusement rises higher. Several of the others try and fail to not join in. It heightens your blood pressure until your face is hot to the touch.
âThatâs a very good try, princess.â He beams, patting your hip.Â
Neteyam unfortunately is not the fool you hope for him to be. Nor the arrogant alpha that would make the mistake of believing himself capable of catching you once youâve set off on a paâli. Youâve been riding since you were barely able to walk. The Omatikaya may understand the concept, but they hold not near the same precision and skill that your years of training have granted you.Â
Itâs a fact he seems acutely aware of because he doesnât let you saddle up first. All it would take is a few seconds for you to make the bond and leave them in the dust. Instead, he hands you off to another male as he settles himself upon the creature and only after he has made the bond himself does he have you lifted to sit in front of him.Â
By the time you settle around a fire for dinner and begin setting up camp, you can feel your eye on the verge of twitching. This journey has been nothing but painful and slow. So exceedingly slow. Although every step is one step further from your home that doesnât erase the annoyance you feel at their painstaking pace. The only thing that stops you from snapping at them to hurry up is the hope that this extra time will help you come up with some sort of escape plan.Â
Itâs clear that your fatherâs remorse is far too sluggish for you to solely rely on at this rate, so it seems it is once again up to you to meet them halfway.Â
However hatching up plans is exceedingly difficult when you have an alpha sculpted against your back, his essence clouding your mind and his eyes constantly peeking down at you as if he knows every thought swirling in your head. Try as you might, there is no reasonable way to veer away from his touch while riding the paâli, at least not one that keeps you from developing excruciating back pain.Â
Trying to set your inner turmoil aside, you focus on using this time away from the Omatikaya prince to properly set your head right. However, it seems Neteyam has different plans as he settles to lounge by the fire. He thanks one of the other males for a drink he is handed before his attention lands on you.Â
âCome sit, princess.â He pats the spot beside him. There may be a warm smile to accompany his words but you know that it is nothing short of a command. The steely undertone of an alphaâs call reverberates in his tone.Â
It locks your spine into a ramrod straight position and your tail already tries to tuck itself the longer you wait to obey. Itâs irrelevant, however. Youâve become quite adept at pushing down your omega instincts in favor of following your own logic instead.Â
With a smooth stroll and a feigned innocence to your smile, you maintain eye contact while making a show of sitting next to a different male across the fire. Heâs a beta and your proximity immediately has him twitching.Â
Neteyamâs golden eyes take on a darker hue, but he remains where he is. Youâve challenged his authority, in front of his men no less, but somehow you escape the night unscathed from his rath. Or so you think.Â
Itâs hard to say whether these sleeping arrangements are usual for the Omatikaya or rather just a setup meant for traveling. Either way, it is the most bizarre thing to sleep in a roll of fabric high up in the trees. Netyam claims itâs safer to stay off the ground during eclipse in the forest. A silly point truly when itâs just as dangerous, if not more likely, to turn over in your sleep and fall to your death.Â
Climbing up to the hammock is all the more painful and terrifying than riding with Neteyam. He patiently trails behind, waiting and giving unwanted direction for your climb until you have finally cocooned yourself in the fabric. Still trembling but refusing to voice any complaints that could be mocked, you take a moment to catch your breath.Â
That moment is exceedingly short.
The hammock suddenly swings and you look up to find the prince lowering himself down carefully from a branch above.Â
âNo no, absolutely not. This is my bed. Get out.â He chuckles as you try to push and swat at his muscular thighs but itâs no use when he is settled in the fabric a few seconds later.Â
âTechnically it is our bed.âÂ
âThen I will take my chances on the ground.â Your stomach somersaults at the thought of enduring the climb down.Â
Comment ignored, Neteyam coaxes you to lay down before slipping himself behind you. Youâre tempted to kick when he wraps an arm around your waist but the hammock is still swinging to a point of nausea. Best not to make it any worse.Â
âYouâre trembling, omega.â Itâs murmured against the shell of your ear. There is no need to look down in order to confirm his assertion. How do the Omatikaya sleep peacefully up in the trees like this? Youâve never considered yourself to have a fear of heights but today has you questioning that assurance all together.Â
âYou look like you need someone to calm you down.â The palm of his right hand runs up and down the length of your arm, as if the transferring heat there would diminish your shivering.Â
âWhat I need is a break from your pestering.âÂ
âI already gave you one.â His tale tickles at the back of your knee just as his accented voice deepens. âA break that I have still not received a thank you for.âÂ
âI wouldnât hold your breath waiting, my prince.â You sneer. It wasnât his decision to have you sit away from him during dinner. It was entirely your own and he is not about to receive acknowledgment as if he had any control over what you do.Â
âI hope you know what youâre playing at, princess.âÂ
Those are the last words he speaks of the night and consequently the same ones that leave you restless and twitching. Sleeping like this is impossible. When youâre not worried about falling to your death you become acutely aware of every point of contact between you and Neteyam. His toned chest is like a bustling fire against your back. His tail at some point wraps around knee as if it belongs there. Even his silky ebony braids tickle at your neck, almost as bad as where his face tucks itself behind your ear.Â
There is no forgetting who lays behind you. Sleep seems to never come because you are constantly trying to calm your raging heart and control the pheromones that threaten to slip into the air. That would wake him up far too easily.Â
His breath is heavy, heartbeat consistent and strong from where it pounds against your back. Youâve been sure for a while now that he is fast asleep. Now is the time to make your move, but frozen you remain. Eventually you look down to find that your fingers have begun tracing the veins of his forearm as an anxious tick.Â
Thank Eywa he seems to not wake up from the touch. Or perhaps it is the smooth caress that has coaxed him further into sleep. Either way, you hold very little hope of not only climbing down the trees without splitting your pretty head open but also doing so unnoticed.Â
Sleep comes and goes along with the hours until waiting has wound you taunt. It is only a matter of time before the sun rises again and youâve lost the window of opportunity. So with sweaty hands and a heart threatening to come up your throat, you cautiously slide yourself out from his hold.Â
By some miracle it turns out that Neteyam is the deepest sleeper you have ever met, because even as the hammock sways from your climbing out, he simply lets out a sigh and turns his head further into the fabric.Â
Scaling down the tree is a test in vigilance and patience. Every smooth breath you force yourself to take is a practice in these arts. Stubbornly you refuse to look down, knowing it will only bring forth nerve ridden mistakes. So with the pace of a snail you inch further and further down the trunk.Â
You just need to make it to a paâli.
Thatâs it.Â
So close. So very close, you tell yourself, even as you know itâs a lie.
âWhat are you doing?â
Your breath catches in your throat, thighs tensing as you remember to still keep hold. Your muscles relax slightly, however, when you notice that the voice holds an Omatikaya accent but it is not Neteyamâs. The beta from dinner sits up in his hammock, eyes squinting at you through the darkness. Say the wrong thing and he is bound to sound the alarm.Â
âYou should not be out of bed.â He sighs.Â
âI must relieve myself.â Biting your bottom lip you steer your features into confident defiance. âOr am I not allowed to do that too?â
The beta lets out a sigh and a curse you do not recognize. It must be part of the Sky Peopleâs weird language.Â
âAlright, I will assist you just wait for a moment.âÂ
âI donât require an audience.âÂ
âBut you do require supervision.âÂ
Itâs difficult to argue when you remain clinging to a tree for dear life. So when the beta helps you make it down the tree foothold by foothold, there is nothing left in you to protest. Instead, you simply shift gears.Â
âBe quick.â The male says, gesturing to a secluded spot behind thick bushes.
âIt takes as long as it takes.â Head held high, you walk past him and into the bushes. Luckily the sounds of nocturnal creatures are loud enough to excuse why you are so silent in the bushes. Furthermore, itâs clear that male has at least some respect for your privacy as a woman when he doesnât question again what takes you so long.
Those advantages aside, running now would still do you no good. He has steered the two of you further away from the paâli and running on foot will only get you lost in this entanglement of greenery. And with a beta, one native to the area nonetheless, there is no chance of getting far.Â
Lucky for you, there is always one sure fire way to disable a man without violence.Â
âWhat did you say your name is again?âÂ
The beta straightens when you walk past him.Â
âUm, I didnât.â He picks up into a jog to catch up with your sudden retreat. Not a foot of space is granted between you two. He has grown suspicious.Â
Shifting your long glossy hair over one shoulder, you look over at him with a subtle pout. âWell I donât see how thatâs fair. You know my name but I donât know yours.âÂ
The beta doesnât immediately melt at your softened composure like most males at home do. Rather he seems to clear his throat in discomfort before muttering out, âKeâveâ
âHm, Keâve.â You repeat back, as if savoring the taste of his name on your tongue. Heâs nervous. No doubt, devoted to keeping his distance from the princeâs intended. There are ways to relax him, however. âWell Keâve, not every male is noble enough to lend his help in the middle of the night. You must know your presence has brought me great comfort out here.âÂ
His eyes scrunch but he doesnât respond, perhaps unsure of what response would be safe.Â
âYou see,â With a sigh, you come to a halt. âIâm not very accustomed to feeling vulnerable. We are so far from home in a place I have never been but I still do not enjoy being seen as weak. So I wouldnât admit this to anyone else but I feel as if I can trust you when I say,â You pause for dramatic effect and will tears to your eyes. âIâm scared.â
Were it an alpha, the essence of your fear would be enough to swoop you into their arms and make an oath of protection. Keâve on the other hand is a beta, so his response is more subtle. Yet just as promising when his expression falters and he looks on the verge of sighing again.Â
âYou are safe with us.â And as sure as the sun rises in the morning, so does that inevitable flash of concern spring forth.Â
âI do feel safer with you.â Just a gentle brush of your fingers against his elbow. So subtle in wake of your shining vulnerability that he doesnât shrug it off. âI canât tell you how much that means to me.âÂ
A few stray pieces of hair fall over your cheek to frame your depiction of soft spoken innocence. You are perfectly poised like a flower ready to be picked, a delicate beauty that deserves to be protected at all costs. The same disposition that has had beta men falling at your feet time and time again.Â
They are always enchanted by your demeanor. So much so that when the Oloâekytanâs daughter suddenly spins the table so she is straddling their waist and taking control, they canât help but hand the reins over.Â
âYes well youâŠyou donât need to worry.â Keâveâs eyes donât hold the same snare that Neteyamâs do but you can already imagine how pretty they will look rolling to the back of his head when you have his cock in your mouth. Pleasure has a way of rendering a man defenseless, therefore giving you the perfect opportunity to carry out your plans.Â
With the stealth and precision of a predator stalking its prey you snake your hand up his bicep and over one broad shoulder. Consequently it has your own face inching closer to his wrist where you sensually let his pulse point rub over your throat. It will leave the trace of his scent there, igniting a primal side of him that can be molded perfectly into your designs. âHow can I repay you?â You ask, batting your lashes up at him as you begin the slow descent to your knees.Â
But they never hit the ground.Â
Sharp pain erupts along your scalp as a hand abruptly grabs a chunk of your hair at the roots. That hold is used to veer you back onto your feet and fall back against a warm chest. âI can think of a few ways.âÂ
Your carefully crafted composure shatters into a hiss as you try to recover from both the shock of being caught and the unforgiving grip Neteyam has in your hair. Even more so, the tingling sensation that brutal hold sends down your spine.Â
âOw! Let go!âÂ
âTell the others I will be having a little talk with my omega.â Neteyam commands, ignoring your useless struggling. âYou are dismissed, Keâve.â The beta doesnât need to be told twice, already scurrying to get away.Â
âNow letâs get you sorted out.â Still keeping his hand tangled where you try to dislodge it, Neteyam drags you further into the mysterious forest. You note that the distance, however, is not quite far enough to completely conceal your whining from the others.Â
Feet stumbling once that hold is released, you find yourself unceremoniously deposited onto a large boulder. You can spot the cliffâs edge where it drops down into a waterfall and beyond is the rolling landscape of Pandoraâs forest. The glimmer of eclipse is slowly shifting into the first ray of sunshine to cast over the horizon.Â
âYou just had to prove me right, tiyawn.â Neteyam tutts, squatting onto his haunches so that he is at your level.Â
It takes considerable effort to get your brain back online and position yourself into a pose more flattering and fit for a princess. No male has ever handled you so roughly. They wouldnât dare. But the sting of Neteyamâs tug on your scalp leaves a strange ache behind that has your mind reeling. Trying to put your confident mask back on, you fuss with your hair to get every strand back into place.Â
âAnd you just had to act like a barbarian.â
âDid you really believe it was that easy to sneak away from me?âÂ
Your throat runs dry when you meet his eyes. This wasnât a near successful escape, it was planned. One look at his face and itâs clear that he knew exactly when you left and exactly who was assigned to deter you.Â
âCanât a woman pee in peace?â You fumble out, making your last attempt at defending your story.
âI suppose not when it ends in you practically nuzzling at another man's tewng [loincloth] like a little slut.âÂ
Your jaw drops before you can stop it. Eyes ablaze and tail pointed on alert, you are tempted to throw caution to the wind and slap the alphaâs pretty face. No male, in fact no Naâvi, has ever used such a vulgar term to depict you. Youâve had your share of fun among the betas in your clan, but that makes you no less glittering of a gem. And certainly not a slut.Â
âNo man of honor would even think of using such a term, let alone directing it at me.â When you rise up to your full height, Neteyam stands in suit. âIs this why you asked for my hand? Any normal prince, especially the son of Toruk Makto, should have half the women in the clan begging to mate with him. But maybe even they could not see past your arrogant disrespectful bravado, so you had to travel to another clan entirely to find an unknowing prospect.âÂ
âIs that your theory?â Tone deceptively calm, the deep drag of his voice washes over you like silk.Â
âYou may think that youâve conquered and can now return home with a pep in your step but no matter what you do, there will always be one truth that will haunt you.âÂ
You gulp down the lump in your throat when one of his long strides closes the distance between you. Regardless, you refuse to retreat.Â
âAnd what truth is that, princess?â
Your wild eyes shoot to pierce through him.Â
âThat you chose wrong.â You let that statement hang in the air for a beat, hoping it will press down on him in the silence. However it is disappointment that lays a hold on you when his unreadable expression remains in place.Â
âIs that so?â
Heâs close enough to nearly feel the beat of his heart.Â
âIt may be your experience that omegas in your presence bow in submission and shudder beneath that charming grin, but I am not one of them. I am not subject to swooning for or baring my neck to any alpha. I am too independent for your tastes.âÂ
His chest vibrates with a deep chuckle, one that ironically holds no jovial warmth to it. Instead, paired with the sinful curve of his lips, it wraps thick tendrils around you that act as the calm before the storm.Â
âYouâre not independent, princess. Youâre a spoiled brat.âÂ
Heâs undeterred by your scoff or bat of your hands when he forcefully grasps your chin between two fingers.Â
âWhen my father finds out what kind of man you-â
âYour father has done you a great disservice.â Two steps forward and Neteyam has successfully backed you up against the cool stone. âHe has given you everything youâve asked for, let you go entirely unchecked. We can place part of the blame on him for turning you into a spoiled little thing that thinks it only takes a bat of her lashes to get what she wants.âÂ
When your lips part to sneer a nasty comment at him, Neteyam swiftly presses his thumb over them.Â
âItâs because of this spoiled attitude that you have not properly learned the pleasure of submitting to your nature.â Heâs not trying to hide the shadow of his scent over you now, it circles you into a clouded dome. Leaning his head down, his lips just barely whisper against your own that are still trapped beneath his thumb. âYou donât understand the ecstasy of being tamed.âÂ
A warmth pools at the pit of your stomach. You recognize that feeling and what it means. Putting your desire to win this argument aside, itâs clear that now is the time to bow out before this escalates too far.Â
âGet off.â At first itâs just a whisper. Then when Neteyamâs body remains curled over yours, rock hard and unmoving, your voice rises. âI said get off! You egotistical pervert!â Your cries donât stop and neither does the useless rain of your fists against his chest.Â
But then he is snatching your wrists and hooking a hand beneath your thigh to slide you up onto the rock. The stone is cold against your exposed back and ass, your tail becoming trapped beneath your own weight. Neteyam crushes all hope of sitting back up when he cages your smaller form with his own bulking frame.Â
âAlways have to make it difficult, donât you, tiyawn?â
You fight the urge to squeeze the muscles beneath your captured hands when they land on his chest to push him away.Â
âMaybe it wouldnât be so difficult if you just got off of my ass for once.âÂ
âOh but princess that is exactly where I want to be.â That devilish grin is accented by a ray of sunlight painting his features.Â
Without an inch of personal space it becomes aggravatingly obvious how gorgeous the man above you is. Neteyam is the perfect contrast of broad shoulders and a slim waist shown off by his beautiful woven battle band. His immaculate braids swing down across his cheeks and collarbones to frame his intense eyes, sharp jawline, and lips that were simply made to do sinful things.Â
 Your reflection is cut short when a band begins to wrap around your wrists. Squirm as you might, Neteyam holds no sympathy for your protests as he expertly ties the appendages together. Empty threats. Cries for help. None of them make an ounce of difference.Â
âScream as much as you want if youâre that eager to give the others a show.âÂ
That shuts you up in an instant. It confirms your earlier observation of proximity and immediately has you playing back the conversation to guess how much of it that other males have already heard.Â
âYouâre a monster.âÂ
âHm, and all yours, princess.â A wicked grin across his lips, Neteyam secures your bound wrists to a low branch over the rock. Youâre left stretched out and trapped laying across the boulder beneath him.Â
That cocky expression blanches its color once he draws his nose along your neck. The exact spot you had tricked Keâve to scent you. Your heart hammers on its own accord when Neteyamâs wicked smile drops. Mere seconds ago nothing had seemed more appealing than ripping apart the alpha with the lash of your tongue, but now something in you warns to stay still. To stay quiet.Â
âI was going to wait until we reached Vitraya Ramunong [tree of souls], in light of tradition.â His breath is hot against your neck, a heat that travels like lava down to your very core. âBut it seems my little brat canât wait that long.âÂ
His teeth sink in without warning. It takes a moment for the shock to fizzle out and allow you to feel the pain. Neteyamâs teeth bite and capture the soft flesh there without mercy before his lips suck a dark spot directly over where Keâveâs scent used to be.Â
Your spine arches, hips already bucking without your consent. The only response to your screams and squirming is Neteyamâs own hips pressing you back against the stone. He is ravenous. Biting, sucking, and licking at that one spot until the area has become desensitized to his ministrations.Â
Your body has spiked from zero to one hundred in a matter of seconds. Your head reels with the whiplash of having the male reprimand you one moment and the next sinking his teeth into a mark terrifyingly close to your mating gland.Â
âBetter.â Neteyam finally murmurs against your neck. He seals the mark with a deceptively tender kiss as you are left short circuiting. Your instincts flare, that primal part of your nature climbing out from under the rock youâve kept it trapped beneath.Â
âAreâŠare you insane? Biting that close-âÂ
âI wonât mark you there tonight, tiyawn. Want to be able to feel you through the bond when that happens.â A curved knuckle runs down your kuru, making your toes curl. âOnce we are under the spirit tree together. There are still some traditions Iâd like to keep.â He says with a grin that you could almost associate with a charming gentleman, not the same male that just savagely ravaged your throat like a predator of the night.Â
âBut we will need to find a way to get you to behave until then.â You canât mirror the ease he feels as he speaks. It becomes clear now how dire your circumstances are. You had thought Neteyam wouldnât dare to put a hand on you without permission but now he has proven to be more than willing to not only touch but leave marks behind. There is no telling where he draws the line.Â
And youâre scared, just as you should be, but there is something else far more terrifying that plumps into your bloodstream. A dangerous intrigue that borders excitement.Â
âHow do you suggest we do that, princess?âÂ
No matter how hard you try, no humble response willingly bubbles to your lips. Neteyam is still an asshole, gorgeous or not. Alluring or not. No matter how tempting he may be, that doesnât mean itâs worth exploring the mysterious punishment he has up his sleeve. And youâŠwell youâre still pissed.Â
âMy behavior is nothing in comparison to yours. You-â
A hand comes down on the side of your ass hard enough to have you choking on those words.Â
âYou hit me!â Neteyam simply tilts his head at your accusation.Â
âGood observation, tiyawn.â Not a hint of apology present. This man is not remorseful, he is proud. âIf you keep running your mouth like that I will be forced to do it again. Knowing you, it wonât take long for me to tan that ass red.âÂ
Your father never spanked you as a child. It would break his heart to see his little girl cry the tears it would inevitably provoke. And with your dating experience exclusively being betas, no man has ever tried to right that wrong. Thinking of riding on a paâli with a red ass now has fear jumbling threats past your lips haphazardly.Â
âI swear on my-â
His right hand clamps over your mouth. The pressure is hard enough to have you whining beneath his skin.Â
âThatâs enough from you for now.âÂ
There is nothing left for you to do but watch. Body rendered immobile and now your last weapon at your disposal silenced, you are at the utter mercy of the prince. A mercy that does not appear to be afforded any time soon as his other hand trails down to start undoing the knots of your top.Â
It shouldnât be as scary as it is, watching string be string get unlooped as your crystal top begins to fall slack. However, this particular intimacy is one you are not accustomed to.Â
It had started out as just a silly game you had played when you first started dating. Men were often foaming at the mouth to get a proper glimpse of your subtle breasts. It had been an immediate source of amusement as youâd seen how far they were willing to go for only a chance. And even more rewarding when you noticed how easy it was to never follow through with satisfying this desire.Â
So it continued. It became somewhat common knowledge among your lovers, and any future interested prospects that you keep that part of yourself private. However, you hadnât meant for it to go on as long as it did. Eventually you would cave to a worthy beta and watch him go feral, but that was before you discovered simply how sensitive your nipples are. It only took a few times of playing with yourself, brought on by your interest in nipple piercings, for you to see how vulnerable that area of you is.Â
And now it is ironically Neteyam that uncovers that part of you.
He can sense the shift of your scent the moment it happens. With every tug on the feeble strings your essence takes on a darker hue. Pleasure and pain. Arousal and fear. These combinations are ones you have not been properly exposed to. Perhaps were it not for him, you would never have been humble enough to try them.Â
The last undone tie allows the strung crystals to slide over the curve of your chest before dropping to the floor. What pretty little things you adorn yourself with, yet they do very little to protect you. Because itâs clear to him that in your eyes, protection is never needed. You can not fathom how much you have truly gotten away with.
Prancing around in your little outfits. Torturing men with what they want but canât truly possess. Expecting the world to shift whatever way you desire with the wave of your hand. Itâs laughable how you never imagined to face the consequences of such actions.Â
Youâre a haughty little thing just waiting to be put in your place.Â
âMy brat.â Neteyam smirks, leaning down to place a kiss at the slope between your breasts. Goosebumps ripple over your beautiful azure skin. Itâs a visceral reaction to the smallest of his touches and it drives him near insanity. How perfect this pretty body of yours will be as a canvas for his marks. A vessel for his heir.Â
Fuck, you are beautiful.Â
Perhaps he canât entirely blame you for being so arrogant. Your beauty is enough to hold a man captive with just a simple glance. And youâve taken advantage of that far too many times.Â
He allows himself to fall captive to it now. Unlike the others, he wonât need to starve after you once youâve decided youâre done playing with him like a toy. No, you will be bound to him. You will belong to him completely.Â
âSo pretty.â He coos, his lips just barely painting over your right breast. When his bottom lip hover over your nipple he watches in awe as it hardens. âBut you already know that, donât you?âÂ
Youâve gone silent, but he can feel the stutter of your breath beneath his hand. It would be unfair to neglect the other side, so Neteyam takes his time showing your left breast the same gentle attention that has your other nipple following in suit. Heâs heard of your reluctance to reveal such pretty breasts to your lovers, but he never imagined it would be due to such sensitivity.Â
Itâs like watching a flower bloom for him. The way you squirm and whine at even the drag of his eyes over your delectable form. Neteyam lets his hand slip from your mouth, no longer willing to explore only with his lips.Â
His fingertips start a trail down by your navel and ascend up over your stomach and towards your chest at a slow pace. When he finally reaches to gently palm at your right breasts he feels your heartbeat pounding like a drum under his fingers. So many nights he has dreamed of touching you like this, rendering you utterly speechless before he has even started. Now as your lips part and breath becomes labored from his simple touches, there is no sight more delightful.Â
You are perfect. You have an attitude that is in major need of fixing but even that is simply a beautiful challenge Eywa has created for him. The way you fit in his hands, gently massaging that supple flesh, itâs clear She crafted your body specifically for him too.Â
The sun has finally breached the line of the horizon and now it sparkles along your chest in a dazzling show. The white crystals woven in your hair remind him of the halos worn by the angels his father has described.Â
He applies more pressure with his right hand until the plump flesh is spilling between his fingers, giving him the perfect presentation for his salivating mouth. What starts out as an open mouthed kiss a few inches above your nipple quickly turns into sucking that flesh into his mouth until you are writhing. He groans at the sounds you make and when he pulls back to see the purple mark rising along your skin, the sight is enough to have him on the brink of purring in elation.Â
Neteyam bends forward and starts crafting his brand on the other side so they are a matching set. This time he takes care in placing it further below your left nipple, at the crease where your stomach meets your chest. It will be difficult for you to find a top able to cover up this claim wrought by his teeth, a purposeful decision on his part.Â
âTeyâŠmmm⊠teyam wait!âÂ
He grins at the cute nickname youâve already coined for him, but that only buys you a few seconds before he is finally puckering his lips around one of your stiff points. The reaction is instantaneous, spine curving and a screech barreling up your throat. He doesnât start off sucking too hard, instead just enjoys the way you feel in his mouth. Eventually, though, the whines you make are too decadent for him to resist making them ring louder. So he sucks harder at the little point and groans around the sensitive area so that it has vibrations shooting through you.Â
âFinally being so good to me, tiyawn, arenât you?â He says, taking a moment to release your nipple with an audible pop. âLaying yourself out for me to enjoy. I knew you could be a good girl.âÂ
You havenât come to earn this praise yet, but itâs important to leave an alluring snippet that exhibits what could come if you only behave. As much as you may want to fight it, your nature wonât let you escape how good such praise feels. You are a stubborn woman but your body wants to submit to him. There is a part of you, no matter how deep youâve buried it, that yearns to please your alpha.Â
He snaps you back into the moment by softly closing his teeth around your left nipple. It takes a hand against your stomach to stop you from rolling onto your side and away from his soft torment.Â
âItâs too sensitive! Stop!â Your pouted lips beg but your strengthening perfume gives your arousal away. Just as he figured, youâve yet to experience how beautifully pleasure and pain intertwine. He rolls that bud sensually between his teeth before carefully giving it a tug.Â
He alternates between tormenting your nipples and savoring the plush curve of your breasts with his hands and mouth. The skin is soft beneath his calloused palms. It has him wondering how it would feel to have that velvety skin squished around his cock and as he fucks your breasts. Neteyam swallows back the pooling saliva on his tongue, a string of it still connecting his lips to where he laid his last mark on your tits. Itâs almost tempting enough to forgo his plans altogether and sate his lust driven curiosity, but Neteyam shakes it away.
The two of you will have plenty of time to experiment later.Â
âTeyam, please no more. Itâs too much!â Your pleas have died down in volume. Now they are coated with your labored breath as you try to control the pounding of your heart.Â
âToo much, princess?â He questions and guides his hand down south to rest over your loincloth. âOr not enough?â When he cups your pussy through the fabric you roll up against him and chase whatever friction he is willing to give. Â
Itâs not nearly enough, he can tell from your disappointed expression when he pulls away entirely. Pupils blown wide and chest heaving to catch your breath, you remain silent as he reaches for the pouch attached to his tewng.Â
Neteyam pulls out a line of woven crystals, much like the ones you wear in your hair but these were foraged from the caves near his home. There are fastens on either end of the chain that took far too much time for him to craft.Â
âIs that for me?â Naturally you ask, that pretty face already showing how quick you are to forget what he was doing to you mere seconds ago once a shiny gift is presented. Neteyam fights the curve of his lips and keeps his every from rolling. Always so predictable.
âJust for you, princess.â
He had crafted it after his last visit to your village. Far before the Olangi clan thought the threat of Sky People was great enough to require protection but him and his father had been there to spread the news regardless. He knew before you even spoke that you thought the world was at your feet. Even the way you walked, spoke of a spoiled elegance. And when he had tried to sate his curiosity towards you with a conversation you were nothing but rude and spiteful towards him.
He knew then that you were going to be his, one or another.Â
And so he started foraging for the crystals that first night back.Â
âSo pretty,â you murmur, voice airy. Those golden eyes narrow as you squint to look at it. Despite your current position and already wrecked voice, a sneaky little smirk forms over your lips. âBut you miscounted. My hair is much longer than that.â
He lets you have your moment, watches as you grin up at him as if you have finally landed a critical blow. All for that to sizzle out when he bends down to whisper in your ear.Â
âWho said anything about your hair?âÂ
The confused scrunch of your features doesnât last long when he begins running the cool metal of the clamps up and down your right nipple. Nipple clamps are not a traditional erotic tool for the Naâvi so heâs certain you donât believe your first instinct as to where that is going until he starts to pinch the right one to prepare it.Â
âNeteyam, no! Get that away-â He clasps his other hand over your mouth again. Always the demands with you. Sooner than later you will learn that begging gets you a lot further with him. Itâs a little trickier to prepare with only one hand available but Neteyam manages.Â
The alpha plants a knee across your pelvis to keep you place while his right hand tugs at your nipples to confirm they are pointed enough to clamp onto. When the first clamp goes on your right nipple, your screeching goes up an octave. You know what to expect better when the left one is attached but that doesnât diminish your reaction.Â
Lovely little drama queen you are, the fit that follows is inevitable. Heâs tested the clamps and consulted with several Sky People before deciding to use them on you so he knows there isnât any real damage being done. Still, you are going to squirm and screech and, were it not for his hand, probably shout every insult you can think of at him, because you have never been punished like this. And your tantrums are what has worked for you in the past.Â
He lets you fight it out as he holds you down. Neteyam doesnât mind as it gives him time to admire his handy work. The chain of crystal connecting the clamps hang exquisitely between your curves. Those stiff points have turned a new shade of purple as they peek out between the clampâs teeth.Â
âEnough.â Neteyam finally quips back, tugging at the chain. A mix between a moan and groan rumbles from your throat. Once his hand has retreated he can hear the sound properly. Keeping his pointer finger curled around the crystal chain, the prince raises a warning brow at you. âAre you done throwing your fit?â
He watches your pupils dilate and lips curl into a pout.
âWhatâs wrong? Donât you like my gift?âÂ
âIt hurts.â You whimper with a quivering bottom lip. Itâs difficult to say how genuine the reaction is considering what a good little actress you are.Â
He nods his head, mocking your pout with a feigned one upon his own lips. That only whips your stare into pointed daggers.Â
âItâs supposed to, tiyawn. Thatâs why it is called punishment.â He kisses right above your left clamped nipple. âA term you may become very familiar with if you donât fix your attitude.âÂ
Pulling back from where you glare, Neteyam settles himself beside you on his side. His left arm props against the rock to casually support his head while the right drags down your torso. The alphaâs ears perks at the little hiss you release when he just barely brushes the chain but he continues down south.Â
Another time when the moon is still out he will kiss every little tanhi that dots your precious body until you cry for more. For now, he is only focused on one location.Â
Neteyam can sense the heat of your core the second his fingertips slip beneath your loinclothâs waistband. You are soft and wet, just like he had imagined so many times. Flared nostrils greedily inhale your scent as he pauses to cup your entire pussy. Much like before, you canât help but react to his touch. With a little more pressure in his firm hold, a trickle of wetness drops onto his palm.Â
Fuck, you are inescapable!
You may believe he is to blame for this arrangement but the truth is you are the one that has trapped him since the moment he caught a whiff of your essence. It is him that has been utterly destroyed by his constant thoughts of you.Â
âBut I know that isnât all there is to it, is there?â He continues, softly kissing your shoulder. âItâs not just pain you feel. Thereâs something else.âÂ
Your poor bottom lip has been utterly abused by your sharp teeth. Whatever sacrifice it takes for you to keep from admitting the truth to him. He discards your tewng with one hand.Â
âA unique sense of-â He spreads your folds to suddenly massage your peeking clit with his pointer finger, stealing a gasp from you. âPleasure.â Neteyam finishes with a grin.Â
You turn to putty in his hands. The tension riddled along your muscles unravel as he rubs circles along your clit with just the right amount of pressure. When he clasps the chain between his teeth and tugs your eyes fly open, taking in your surroundings as if the pleasure has made you forget where you are entirely.Â
âCanât space out on me yet, princess. We still have more to discuss.âÂ
Talking appears to be the last thing on your mind, hips already rolling to hump against his hand. So close to the edge already that it causes a burst of pride to warm in his chest. Warm thighs bracket his hand as if afraid it will pull away at any moment. Smiling softly at the display, Neteyam smoothly covers your upper body with his own, nose to nose in a matter of seconds.Â
There is nowhere for you to hide now, every microreaction bared for him. Those vibrant eyes remain locked on his own, but he catches the way they occasionally dart to his lips before returning.Â
He doesnât need to be told twice.Â
Your lips against his are like decadent chocolate, the swirl of his tongue around your own is another burst of flavor he simply can not get enough of. And so the prince swirls the kiss into a languid roll of passion that leaves your lips ruby red and breaths coming out in puffs once he pulls away.Â
His hand is drenched in your juices. So much so that when he switches to his thumb rubbing your clit and pointer finger tapping at your entrance, those soaking walls capture him at the first sign of intrusion. Your tight heat sucks in the first digit, pulsing around him greedily as your eyes roll back.Â
Another tug to the chain and he has your attention again.Â
âLetâs start with an easy question, tiyawn.â He starts. âWhat were you going to do to Keâve?â
Smart little thing that you are, or perhaps manipulative is a more accurate term, you act as if the pleasure has completely swept you away from understanding him. Beautiful little whimpers rumble in your throat and a look of pure lust crosses over your deceivingly innocent features.Â
Neteyam isnât willing to wait to see how you act your way out of this.Â
His finger stops curling and thumb halts before his other hand pushes your thigh upward so that he can land a crackling spank to your ass.Â
âPrincess,â Neteyam drawls out in a mocking sing-song voice. âIâm running out of patience.â
The charade drops but your body trembles from the sudden lack of stimulation.Â
âI was going to distract him.â Itâs spoken so softly that his ears twitch and strain to make sure he hears you correctly. The finger inside of you restarts, curling up against your g spot while his thumb torments that bundle of nerves from the other side.Â
âThatâs a nice way of putting it.â He slots his face against the slope of your throat. The fragrance that is so uniquely you is especially strong here so there is no stopping the way his tongue naturally flicks out to draw a wet line from your collarbones to jaw. âLet me be more specific. How were you going to distract him?â
The context clues were clearly enough to put two and two together, but he still demands that you say it out loud. The first step to developing remorse is acknowledging what was done.Â
When you take your time thinking up a strategic answer he cruelly pulls his finger out and jams a second one back with it on the thrust. Your toes curl and your face is turned to bury in your hair.Â
âPrincess.âÂ
No response, just a small whine as he scissor his long digits to stretch those velvet walls.Â
âWere you going to suck his cock?âÂ
Your silence is rewarded with his hand stilling. The disappointment has your lips parting to no doubt say something far outside of a good girlâs vocabulary, but one raised brow has you falter in that decision.Â
He twirls the middle of the chain around one finger so it is shortened and with each word he tugs it back sharply.Â
âWere. You. Going. To. Suck. His. Cock.âÂ
âAh mm Yes!â You gasp, eyes squeezed shut but pussy wildly pulsing around his fingers.Â
âThatâs what I thought.â He revels in the naive relief you exhibit when he begins his ministrations between your thighs again. How cute of you to think that a little truth would forgive your earlier sins.Â
Neteyam prowls down your body, savoring the slide of your skin against his own until he is settled between your thighs that are now pushed over his shoulders and he has an unobstructed view of your greedy cunt. While diligently pushing you closer to an orgasm, the alpha takes special care to decide where his next visual claim will be laid. He decides on two spots.Â
The first one is atop your upper thigh where it will be in clear view of anyone you come across and the second is harshly sucked into the sensitive flesh of your left inner thigh.Â
âYou will never walk upon Omatikay soil without my marks.âÂ
You donât appear to hear him.
âOh mm NeteyamâŠfeels so good.âÂ
It might just be the first good thing youâve said all day and his inner alpha purrs in deep satisfaction. Unfortunately for you, punishment comes before rewards.Â
Retracting his hand entirely, Neteyam swipes the remnants of your sticky arousal over your inner thighs, painting his beautiful canvas. There is no time to complain at the loss before he is running the flat of his tongue from your convulsing pussy up over your clit and even navel.Â
That wet muscle dances along and between your folds in practiced precision. Your essence tantalizes his very tastebuds until he is producing so much saliva that it is difficult to say how much of the wet mess at your apex is made from him versus you. He supposes in some ways he is responsible for both.Â
The princeâs lips shine with the evidence when he pulls back to speak.Â
âDo good girls do that?â
âHuhâŠwhat?âÂ
âDo good girls try to suck cocks that are not their alphaâs?â He reiterates, weaving a firm steel into his voice.Â
âIâŠuhâŠno,â Comes your timid response.Â
Those thick lashes flutter when he returns to feasting on your delicious cunt. It only lasts for a second, however, before he is speaking against the soft skin of your thighs.Â
âThatâs right, tiyawn. Good omegas know who they belong to.â
Your body jolts as if stung by lightning when his thumb rubs at your sensitive nub again. He can see it in your face now. His omega is just barely tipping on the edge of release.Â
âSo what do you think you should do about it?â
Breath borderline erratic the muscles in your legs tense in anticipation of that wonderful release. The same one that he roughly rips away when you donât respond, not daring to even breath across your cunt.Â
âNo no please! Iâm so close! Just a little longer. I wanna come!âÂ
âWhat do you think you should do about it?â Neteyam repeats, tampering down the smirk that threatens to cross his lips when he sees the way you whine and tugs at your bonds.Â
âForâŠfor what?â Youâre so genuinely confused he has to hold back a coo at how adorable you look.Â
âWhat do you think you should do to make up for trying to suck his cock?â
That little head of yours is working overtime to craft an intelligent response. It becomes all that much harder when he starts playing with your clit again, keeping you tantalizingly close to the edge but never over.Â
âIâŠI couldâŠI..â
âYes?â Neteyam considers himself very patient but he is forced to halt his touch when you take too long to respond and get far too close to coming.Â
âNo wait! Why did you stop?â Your foot stomps against the rock like the spoiled brat that you are, so utterly confused and crestfallen at being denied for the first time. Has any male ever even tried to edge you? If your response is anything to go off of, itâs clear that he will be the first to teach you the joys of orgasm denial too.Â
âAnswer my question, oeyÓ tiyawn [my love].âÂ
Frustrated tears run from the corner of your eyes and this time Neteyam is positive they are genuine. Your little pout is broken by sharp teeth torturing your bottom lip again while you try to get a hold of yourself to respond properly.Â
âIâŠI could suck your cock.â It comes out almost as a question but the prince is eager to take it.Â
âThere you go.â He hoists himself up to deposit a kiss on your lips before shrinking back down and continuing a very special kiss between your legs. Your pretty thighs immediately clamp around his head, shaking so hard he can feel the vibrations. As much as he wants to taste your release properly he canât pass up the opportunity to see your face for the first time as you come.
So the alpha escapes the cage of your thighs and replaces his tongue with skilled fingers the fuck up into your pussy and play with that precious bundle of nerves. He kisses his way up your body, this time being mindful of the crystal chain, until he is nuzzling against your cheek. The woodsy essence of his own scent will integrate there, letting everyone know that you have been claimed.Â
âSuch a smart girl my omega is. So good for her alpha.âÂ
That is your undoing. Like a woven tapestry he watches you unravel into an explosion of pure ecstasy. All of this time youâve denied yourself the wondrous caress of an alphaâs praise. Itâs left you with no defenses once finally showered with his sweet words. Neteyam groans deeply beneath your whiny scream, savoring the way his hand is now properly drenched as he rides you through the orgasm.Â
You donât register when Neteyam pulls away. In fact your head is so high above the clouds that itâs only when your hands drop like a dead weight against the boulder that you realize Neteyam has cut your bonds.Â
It feels as if the world is a hazy blur of color, everything so vibrant and wondrous as you come down from that high. Even the simple kisses Neteyam gives to each of your wrists feels like drinking sunshine. In fact it is so incredible that you instantly crave more.Â
More of him.Â
More of this electric pleasure.
Anything and everything that has brought you into such a happy state.Â
However, when the prince comes to carefully help you off the boulder and back onto your feet, itâs suddenly clear what it will take to get another taste of cloud nine. And in this case, that means tasting him.Â
Neteyam hardly needs to prompt you onto your knees. Whatever is brewing inside of you is now your new addiction and somehow being at eye level with his crotch has never seemed more appealing. Your alpha wants you to atone for your sins, perhaps then he will grant you another orgasm. Well if taking him down your throat is redemption then you are going to be good at this game.Â
Past experience is the foundation of your confidence.Â
Hands still shaking with aftershock, they fumble to get a hold of his tewng. Youâre about to catch hold of the waistband and simply rip the fabric down when strong hands catch your wrists. You look up at him in bewilderment. What type of man stops a woman on her knees second before he is about to get his dick sucked?
âWeâre not going to do this your way, princess. If you want to make it up to me then you will learn to follow my instructions.âÂ
In some ways itâs borderline insulting. What is wrong with the way you suck a male off? No man has ever complained. And if they did, how would Neteyam even know? Heâs never experienced nor witnessed what you do. But of course as an alpha he must believe he knows best.Â
Typical.
Those thoughts donât bubble into words, however, because as much as you would like to prove how fucking fantastic you are all on your own, you donât want it more than another orgasm. Preferably by the means of his skilled tongue.
When he drops your wrists you shift uncomfortably, both impatience and the tight press of the clamps around your nipples creates the undeniable need to squirm. All while Neteyam simply watches you from above, perfectly calm and entertained by your position.Â
That is until you go to shift the clamps and your wrists are immediately snagged again.Â
âDid I say you could touch that?â He asks, that smooth voice taking on a smoky edge. Just when you are about to pout, however, Neteyam pulls your hands to place them along his upper thighs. You donât need to be told twice. Running your hands along the smooth skin and squeezing the corded muscle there is a nice enough distraction to silence your objections.Â
That is, until a new distraction presents itself.Â
His long fingers carefully start to undo the ties of his tewng. Done at such a leisured pace itâs obvious he is determined to torture you, even pausing at one point to tuck a strand of hair behind your ear before finally lets the cloth fall away.Â
Excitement quickly mingles with apprehension when you see what you are faced with.Â
Beta males have always satisfied you with their size, just enough to make you choke a little and hit that special spot inside of you. However, youâve forgotten entirely what it means to be with an alpha. Neteyamâs cock curves up against his lower abs, fully hard and already sporting a drop of precum. But even the thought of fitting your mouth around that bulbous head, let alone trying to get the massive length down your throat makes your ears begin to twitch.Â
All confidence quickly drains from your face.Â
âAre you ready to listen now?âÂ
Finally peeling your gaze away from his twitching cock, you look up at him to see him staring down at you with the same intensity.Â
âYes.â You whisper, suddenly grateful for promised instruction now that youâve been properly thrown for a loop. Perhaps you should have branched out to fucking with alphas at least once, just to know the difference properly. Because now you feel like a proper virgin waiting for their first lesson on giving a blow job.Â
Surprisingly there is one feeling that rises higher than your trepidation.
Curiosity.Â
Somehow the challenge before you sparks a further interest. A need to map out every part of his body until it has become less mysterious. Until it feels familiar beneath your hands.
And as if Neteyam can read your thoughts, he says, âYou can explore now, tiyawn. Take your time.âÂ
Take your time. Not the direction you would expect from a male whose cock is fully hard and jerking against his lower stomach. You had thought all alphas to be forceful, wanting to claim and fuck in a quick and dirty fashion. But Neteyam stays true to his word when your hands slowly travel up his thighs.Â
You are given more than enough time to familiarize yourself with the area. You start small, running the pads of your fingers down his muscular abdomen to feel each and every muscle there. Then once a little bit of confidence has been regained they come to rest around his base.Â
The dark blue shade of his skin elegantly bleeds into a beautiful purple the closer to the tip it goes. All to then end on a subdued shade of pink along his head and balls. Even without the moonlight you can make out the small tanhi that dot along his skin. They lead along the side, creating a trail beside the thick vein lacing the underside of this cock before fanning out around the tip. As if they were perfectly crafted to entice your eyes towards the prize.Â
Neteyamâs tail lashes the first time you run your fingers over him. His arousal is an essence that infiltrates the very air around you like a thick cloud. Surely he must be anxious for you to hurry up, but the prince keeps his body strictly in place for your exploration.Â
It is only when he catches your tongue swiping over your bottom lip that he speaks up.Â
âYou can use your tongue, tiyawn.â With an inaudible gasp you pull back in surprise, practically forgetting he was there. An amused grin shows off his pearly white teeth, never faltering as you hesitate for a moment. âAre you feeling shy, princess?âÂ
âNo.â You bite back even as your stomach does a somersault.Â
âRemember, I will guide you. No need to stress.â His fingers run through your scalp and in spite of how good that feels you rear back and glare at him.Â
You donât need help. And you sure as hell are not shy. So what if you are a little caught off guard? That does not give him the right to treat you like an omega virgin ripe for the picking.Â
So you draw forward and boldly draw the flat of your tongue slowly from the base to tip. Much like he had done between your own thighs. Because much like him, you are not afraid and you are not one to hand the reins over easily.Â
What you do not anticipate is how the taste of him blossoms over your tastebuds. It sends a thrill through you that is difficult to conceal as you go in for another taste. It gets sloppy very quickly. The moment you try to take the head into your mouth, your nerves get the better of you and that ends up making you draw back.Â
Just in time as Neteyam slots a hand in your dark locks and grabs hold of the roots. âWhy are you rushing, omega?âÂ
âI am not.âÂ
âFollow my directions. No need to prove yourself.â He says, but he already wears a crooked smirk.Â
It continues like this back and forth until you are finally tired of having your head yanked back by your hair so you wait for his instructions. Neteyam is meticulous in the way he has you explore, the way he forces you to taste him before even giving you the chance to take him into your mouth.Â
But when you do finally take in the first few inches your inner omega springs forth without reserve. You feel every ridge and vein of his cock as they slip past your outstretched lips. And that stretch, that utterly deniable feeling of being stretched full, is what has you drawing in for more.Â
Before now being on your knees has always felt like a place of power. Youâve riddle men down to whimpering messes just by the skilled trace of your tongue. Youâve swallowed everything theyâve had to give while theyâve sung curses to the sky. It is them that is rendered entirely insatiable as you hold their pleasure in the palm of your hand.Â
It doesnât feel that way now.Â
Itâs hard to determine what he awakens within you but every time you are pulled off of his cock and told to take a moment to breathe, it is you that feels insatiable. You figured it would get better once Neteyam fell deep enough into his own ecstasy but somehow the evidence of his pleasure only escalates your own addiction. You can never get enough of him.Â
Never will you tire of seeing his magnificent neck on display when he throws his head back with a rumbled groan. Never will you suck down the taste of him enough to satisfy your carnal desires. And never will there be a more magnificent feeling than the wash of his praise over you as your throat contracts and you gags around him.Â
It is him that leaves you ravenous.Â
âAll the way down now, princess. Thatâs it, you can take it.âÂ
Youâd take just about anything this man says at gospel at this point. A fact that is evident by the way you no longer hesitate to sheath him down your throat when commanded. And when those sinfully gorgeous hips start to move, you fight every need for breath and simply let him fuck your throat without complaint.Â
In fact it is you that complains when you are given a chance to breathe, tears streaking down your face and drool coating your chin.Â
âNo whining.â Neteyam tsks, wagging a finger playfully. It would normally piss you off but now it only registers as the absence of praise. So when he continues to the pattern, moaning and bucking his hips only to pull off seconds later, you bite back the urge to cry and beg for his cum. âJust get me wet, princess. Tongue out. There you go.âÂ
It makes no sense, but then again that seems to be the theme when it comes to Neteyam. He demands you suck him off only to deny you the pleasure of feeling him shoot down your throat. Your pretty face is nothing but a mess of tears and spit when he finally rears you back for the last time. For a moment it seems possible he will jerk himself off and finish across your face or pinched nipples but his next direction has your tail tucking.Â
âThereâs my good girl. Now stand up for me.âÂ
âNeteyam.â You whine but he is quick to grab hold of that crystal chain and force you to your feet as your nipples ache.Â
âAre you still wet for me, omega? Spread your legs.â He slides a hand between your thighs to inspect the evidence of just how aroused you truly are. âVery good girl.â He grins against your ear, as if he didnât already know how desperate he has made you.Â
Itâs only a second of attention to your clit before he is taking your hand and dragging you through the forest.Â
Neteyam has always been known for being meticulous. Or in Loâakâs words, obsessive. He has lived his life with a plan and great attention to detail. So when he has you following him, your hand in his own, he canât help but look for the perfect spot to take you. The ideal place where he can admire you spread out for him and finally experience what it is to be inside of that sweet little body.Â
Heâs pleased to find you put up no fuss when he coerces you onto your stomach with your face down and ass up. In fact, your spine curves as you look back at him, a seductive gleam in your eyes that says you are still not above playing games to get what you want.Â
âMâready.â You sigh against the grass, tail curling upwards to give him access. It may as well be the equivalent of snapping your fingers in a fetching command. Regardless, Neteyam decides to let you off this time, especially when you are creating the most gorgeous display for him.Â
Your pussy clenches around open air, your cunt an absolute mess that has dripped down between your thighs. There is no mistaking what you want.Â
But that doesnât mean that is what youâre going to get.Â
You donât immediately react when he uses both hands to knead and spread your plump cheeks apart, but when he begins to push a finger at your tightest hole, you squeak and draw back. With a stern hand gripping your hip he pulls you back against him where he kneels. Tentatively you trust him once more only to squirm when he only sticks his fingers into your pussy in order to collect your slick arousal and spread it between your cheeks.Â
âNeteyam!â
âMawey, princess. Youâll like it, I promise.â And you will, despite your better judgment.Â
âNo, not there!â Were it not for the hazy glow he has you in now you surely would claw his eyes out for even suggesting such a thing but with his thumb reaching down to rub at your sensitive clit, your defenses are greatly weakened.Â
âAnd why not, tiyawn?â
âI want you to fuck me.â You drawl with a whine.Â
âAnd I am.â Neteyam slinks up so his chest is pressed against your back, pushing away your hair so he can whisper in your ear. âI am going to fuck my spoiled brat until the only words she can manage to utter are thank you and my name.â
You sputter at his sensual words, pussy trying to clamp around the finger that swirls through your juices.Â
âBut thatâsâŠt-thatâs not what I mean.âÂ
âAre you nervous, tiyawn?â
âN-no.â
âNo male has ever tried to stretch this little hole before, have they?âÂ
You simply attempt to tuck your face away from him as it turns a lovely shade of red. Neteyam grins and kisses your cheek.Â
âI am going to take every first you have left, princess. I will fuck all of your holes over and over again, including this naughty little hole.â A shudder ripples through your trapped frame. âYour greedy pussy too but the first time I do that we will bonded beneath Vitraya Ramunong so until thenâŠâ He grips your hip to keep you in place when his lubed finger finally starts pushing past that clenching rim.
âBreathe oeyÓ tiyawn.â He hushes your whines. It takes considerable effort to coax you into relaxing for him but Neteyam finds that the right amount of praise and gentle kisses seems to get the job done.Â
Fuck, you are so incredibly tight! It feels as if you are trying to cut off the circulation in his fingers as he adds another. His heart races at those pulsing walls around his cock. You do nothing to aid his patience as little pants filtering from your lips and soon your eyes are fluttering closed.Â
You wonât want to admit it, but this new pleasure has you entirely hooked. A strange sensation no doubt, and even uncomfortable at times he can tell as you struggle to take a third finger but so too do you eventually start pushing your hips back against the intrusion.Â
Holding you in place is no longer required, allowing his other hand to slip to the front of your body and resume strumming your clit. Grass becomes intertwined with the sparkling crystals in your hair due to the way you keep turning your head to whine and squirm.Â
âI wish you could see how perfect you look like this. Sweet little ass sucking in my fingers like it was made for this. I knew Iâd see you like this someday, my pretty brat learning to behave.â
âF-fuck you.â You sputter.
Neteyam canât even find it within himself to be mad when you are clenching around him like this. Heâll take care of that naughty mouth soon, but for now he is content to focus on making your body fully submit to him.Â
âAs you wish, omega.âÂ
The prince pulls his fingers out and makes sure to spread more of your natural lube over his cock. He feels like he could bust any moment just looking at your hole clenching at the loss. The gleam in your eyes when he lines the head of his cock up to your tightest hole gives him all the information he needs to know.Â
âTeyam!â You gasp just before his head makes it past the entrance.Â
âDoing so good for me, omega. Stay nice and relaxed.â
âItâs not going to fit.â The protest is greatly undermined by the way your pussy leaks juices down your thigh.Â
âDonât worry, princess. Iâll make it fit.âÂ
And true to his word, Neteyam patiently rears forward and rubs sinful circles over your clit until his pelvis is cushioned by your plush ass.Â
âOh my Eywa!â You quiver, thighs no longer doing the work to keep you up.Â
âWhat was it you said about getting off your ass?â
âYou fuckingâŠOhâŠasshole.â Your insults are barely tangible as he begins with shallow thrusts. âOh myâŠohâŠaahh.â
âDifferent than you thought, isnât it?â He smirks, but even he has to close his eyes and take a moment to breathe. Your walls cinch around him so tightly it feels as if you're trying to strangle his cock. Even his shallow thrusts take considerable effort, even more difficult not to prematurely fill you with his seed every time those gummy walls pulse. âDeep breathes. Let yourself enjoy it.âÂ
âM-more.â
His ears perk, wondering if he has misheard you.
âWhat was-â
âMore! Move now! Move fucking now I swear-â The air is punched from your lungs when he harshly rears back to the tip before plunging himself all the way inside again. The noise that escapes you is one he has never heard before and he knows for a fact that it rings loud enough through the trees for the others to detect.Â
Grasping a handful of hair he pulls you up onto your knees so that your back is flush against his chest. From this vantage point he can see the crystal chain sparkling in the sunlight.Â
âIs that any way to ask for what you want?â He rumbles against your ear.Â
The sound of clapping skin echoes through the forest as you eagerly push yourself back against his now brutal pace.Â
âTeyamteyamteyam,â Comes your endless spew, head thrown back against his shoulder. Heâs too lost in his own ecstasy to chew you out for not answering his question. Instead he roughly manhandles you off of his cock and pushes you to lay down on your back.Â
âBut-â
Legs thrown around his waist he sinks back inside to the hilt. âYou need to learn some fucking patience, princess.â
âIâm sorryyyyy!â You drawl but those little hands are already grasp at his biceps, demanding that he slots himself closer. Looking down he swears he can practically see his cock moving in your stomach.Â
âHow are these pretty tits doing, hm?â Swooping down, he leaves sloppy kisses around your secured nipples, groaning when your fingers claws at his hair to pull him closer. âTell me the truth now, princess. Tell me how much you love me my cock in your ass.âÂ
He knows you're far gone when a response comes back without any fight. âI love..ngh..ahâŠI love your cock in my ass. Donât stop, alpha. Pleasepleaseplease.âÂ
âTake a breath for me.â He commands softly and the second you comply he undoes both claps in tandem. In some ways he has heard that taking them off is more painful than putting them on. If that is true, you must have a secret love for such pain because you bare down on him so hard that it takes everything within him not to bust inside of you.Â
âFuck!â You curse, yanking him down impossibly closer. âNeteyam!âÂ
âGood girl, princess. My good girl.â He murmurs between sloppy kisses laid on your chest. He licks gently over your pointed nipples in efforts to soothe them.Â
Neteyamâs own patience is quickly unraveling but he wants to come in time with you. He wants you to squirt across him as he paints your walls white. So with his own breaths coming out in pants and hips ricketing at a desperate speed, he reaches between you and assaults that little bundle of nerves.Â
âCome on, brat. Do as you're told for once and come for me.âÂ
You steal the very air from his lungs. Your silky walls milk him dry as you come around him. Stars dot his vision and his abdomen flexes at the pure pressure of his own release. He spills himself inside of you as your nails dig into his shoulder blades.Â
When he finally does come down from that high, your grip wonât release. His name is a whispered mantra on your lips as you pull his heavy body atop of yours. He falls without resistance, crushing you beneath him.Â
Youâre overwhelmed. It makes him both proud and spiteful that no other male has truly managed to get you into this floaty state before. From the way you claw at him as if he is the very oxygen you rely on, itâs clear you donât know how to handle such new intense emotions. To think youâve gone so many years without truly satisfying your omega.Â
âIâve got you, omega. Your alphaâs here.â He tries to prop himself up on an elbow to relieve some of his body weight from you, but that has your panic rising. With an endless draw of sweet nothings he presses himself back down just in time for your lips to demand his.Â
That anxiety gradually smoothes away the longer he indulges the impromptu makeout session. When his tongue swirls around yours, your movements become more leisurely. Even the very nature of the kiss becomes lazy while you softly play with his neat braids.Â
âTeyamâŠâ
âYes princess?â He checks to make sure your breathing has finally turned back to normal after pulling away.Â
âIâm ready to sleep.â You say as a matter of fact.Â
âNo tiyawn we still-â Itâs too late. Chest somehow managing to rise and fall beneath his weight and eyes fluttered closed, you are dead to the world. Very typical fashion for you to simply state your wants as reality without waiting for any protests.Â
He rolls his eyes fondly before carefully situating both of you onto your sides. His legs feel like thin vines walloping in the wind. Neteyam has to hold back a groan when he finally manages to slip out of you. Bathing in the sunlight with you tucked against his side, he allows himself one moment to recover and bask in the feeling.Â
And when that moment is gone, he does everything in his power to dress and clean up both of you without disturbing your slumber. Your hair is still tangled and the echoing screams are sure to be enough evidence of what has happened between you two but when he walks out carrying you bridal style, he playfully glares at the other males who are anxious to make their teasing comments. They will beat him up about it later, for now it is important that you sleep.Â
With narrowed eyes and a hiss he demands their silence before he situates you in front of him on the paâli. Facing sideways on the horse you snuggle closer in your sleep, body shivering. You only wake for a second so that he can slip his thick poncho over the both of you. This way you are kept warm and eyes are shielded from the sun as you sleep.
âWell?â Takânal, his second in command, asks with a raised brow.Â
âProblem solved.â Neteyam says simply. âLetâs go home.â
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since i love PAIN
as im rewatching Avatar for the nth time im thinking about how Jake lost his twin brother Tommy. the movie says Tommy is killed a week before he was meant to be shipped out. And they get put into cryo-sleep for over 5 years. that means Jake has only really had a WEEK to come to terms with the fact that his brother is dead. his TWIN BROTHER.
AND THEN when he gets there, he sees the avatar spliced with Tommyâs/his DNA and he sees his brothers face in it, and Norm reminds him that itâs his avatar now, that Tommyâs gone, and he just has to carry on???? be the marine??? not even mentioning the fact that he gets to walk again in this body that looks like Tommy but isnât and he has SO much to learn about lab life AND Ometikaya culture.
and Grace tells him she wishes his brother were there instead and he just feels a punch to his gut, bc yeah, he does too.
Jesus I wrote a lot-
I've been going on and off on making an interactive game where you, the reader, can date, form bonds and talk with the characters all while going through a large-spanning story. Basically fanfic where it's personalized. (You get to choose dialogue options, romantic partner(s), limited backgrounds, gender, personalize your name, etc.) But the problem is I originally made it for an entirely different character.
In other terms, I need anyone who is interested, to vote how I continue this project!
I don't want to spoil too much, but basically the reader is a genetically modified human (I know we all want to be Na'vi but let me cook PLEASASEE) who's a senator/diplomat to another faction called The United Colonies of Sol. They are not allied with the RDA at all, in fact they've come to Pandora to support Jake Sully.
The problem is how I start the story. Originally, it was to be a relative love story between the characters So'lek, Eetu, Teylan, Nor, the Sarentu... And more... (So many characters guys ahhh), but mainly So'lek.
The journey would go something like this: ship crashes, So'lek brings reader to the resistance once he finds out they need to contact Jake Sully. He decides to act as a courier and help deliver them. An Odessy kinda happens where they traverse different areas all while (maybe) falling in love. I thought the dynamic would be cute seeing as reader would be polarizing in comparison to the humans he's met so far (might go further into detail if the other vote wins or if people are curious).
But I found that it might be restrictive to those who've never played AFOP and overall limit the audience. Although the idea works best in that space, I've written 40,000 words in total of the current 'demo' which goes something like this:
Reader crashes (again) but where the Metikaya (I know I'm spelling that wrong, I'm on my phone guys please đ) are located, sadly causing mass destruction. During recovery they meet Tsireya and the other main cast. Having met Jake Sully and possibly gaining his trust, now they need to try finding a way to find their main crew all while the RDA grows in power/influence, and the events of Avatar: Fire and Ash happens. (I know by the time the film releases I'm prob gonna be near that point).
So as you guys can probably see, they're pretty different in characters and motives. Long run, they'll be completely different stories.
On one hand, with AFOP I have the story more formulated to fit the narrative, with the dynamic of the characters and their seperate wants considered for the story. Even the resistance connection to the reader would make better sense. But again, limited and alienating, and the main cast wouldn't be seen for a LONNNGG time... Like, holy shit.
On the other, ATWOW the inclusion of reader will feel less natural and more hand fisted, and how the story goes genuinly relies on plot then character driven actions (mainly) and with the uncertainty of how AFAA will go, it might become obsolete. But, I have already written 40 thousand along with its code as a base. Plus you get to date and talk to the main cast much quicker
No matter how you guys vote, I'll likely reveal info on the AFOP story line on what was supposed to happen, characters, arcs etc. likewise with ATWOW, I'll release the demo if the other wins cause... Damn, 40 thousand words wasted? Nuh uh!
If you have questions, feel free to ask!