Ultra Magnus And Predaking.... Fighting Being Like A Mating And Claiming Ritual For Predacons. Predaking

Im imagining Megatron casually sitting back and reading a datapad, with one arm around Rodimus to keep him from squirming too much. He doesn't really need to though... Roddys sitting in his lap, legs wrapped around him and face buried in his shoulder

Grinding his valve down where it's impaled on Megatrons spike

Every little movement he can't stop himself from doing makes him whine and tear up, because Megs just spent a few hours overloading him into oblivion

Every part of his valve is ridiculously oversensitive, every single node and sensor is being overstimulated by the massive spike, and he's completely helpless and too fucked out to do anything except grind mindlessly.

Them spending the night like that, and every so often Megs will put down his datapad, grab Roddy by the hips, and slam him down on his spike until Megs gets his own overload. Then he picks up the datapad, with Rodimus still sobbing and trembling from the aftershocks of his own overloads, and starts reading again. Casual as can be

TFA Megastar fighting over Optimus and who's superior at pleasuring their lover. Meanwhile Optimus is getting double stuffed between them and fragged out of his mind, impaled on two massive warframe spikes. He's not even aware of the debate going on between the two massive mechs sandwiching him, he's too lost in the sauce to be aware of anything at this point.

Oh my God yes

He's having the time of his life, he's so lost in the sauce

Win Optimus

he's going to be so sore after this but he regrets none of it

i love normal guys doomed by the narrative

Questions to ask beta readers

General:

Were you confused at any point of the story?

What genre would you say this book is?

When did you put the story down?

Is the ending satisfying?

If you had to cut 3 scenes what would they be?

When did you feel like the story really began?

What was the last book you read before this story?

Characters:

Do you get any of the characters names confused?

Which character is your favorite?

If you had to remove a character who would you and why? (you don't have to remove the character, just make sure their role is meaningful)

Which character do you relate to the most?

Which character do you relate to the least?

Do the characters feel real?

Are character relationships believable?

Are the goals clear and influence the plot?

Are the characters distinct (voice, motivations, etc)

Setting:

Which setting was clearest to you?

Which setting was the most memorable?

Am including enough/too much detail?

Plot and conflict:

Are the internal and external conflicts well defined for the main characters?

Are the internal conflicts and the external conflicts organic and believable?

Are there enough stakes?

Are the plot twists believable but still unexpected?

D-16 should get his valve eaten out and I feel like he would try really hard to be quiet (and he fails)

you just KNOW he's chewing a goddamn hole in that pillow trying to shut himself up.

meanwhile orion is in perfect box munching bliss

btw you should buy my zine

this thing on

hot artists don't gatekeep

I've been resource gathering for YEARS so now I am going to share my dragons hoard

Floorplanner. Design and furnish a house for you to use for having a consistent background in your comic or anything! Free, you need an account, easy to use, and you can save multiple houses.

Comparing Heights. Input the heights of characters to see what the different is between them. Great for keeping consistency. Free.

Magma. Draw online with friends in real time. Great for practice or hanging out. Free, paid plan available, account preferred.

Smithsonian Open Access. Loads of free images. Free.

SketchDaily. Lots of pose references, massive library, is set on a timer so you can practice quick figure drawing. Free.

SculptGL. A sculpting tool which I am yet to master, but you should be able to make whatever 3d object you like with it. free.

Pexels. Free stock images. And the search engine is actually pretty good at pulling up what you want.

Figurosity. Great pose references, diverse body types, lots of "how to draw" videos directly on the site, the models are 3d and you can rotate the angle, but you can't make custom poses or edit body proportions. Free, account option, paid plans available.

Line of Action. More drawing references, this one also has a focus on expressions, hands/feet, animals, landscapes. Free.

Animal Photo. You pose a 3d skull model and select an animal species, and they give you a bunch of photo references for that animal at that angle. Super handy. Free.

Height Weight Chart. You ever see an OC listed as having a certain weight but then they look Wildly different than the number suggests? Well here's a site to avoid that! It shows real people at different weights and heights to give you a better idea of what these abstract numbers all look like. Free to use.

Commission for @cappucinotarts I had so much fun making I decided to do it as a short comic :D thank you so much for giving me those three to play with!

Please miniformer Optimus need to cockwarm the biggest strap in the collection that everyone shares.

I need this little cutie sitting on my lap close to passing out but whimpering of even leaving my lap.

I wanna make his belly bulge as much as possible!

Actually going insane over this (affectionate)

Imagine that you’re trying to pull out, and he just… clings to you desperately, throwing his arms around your neck and pushing the strap back into his valve, even more transfluid spilling onto your thigh. He’s this close to short-circuiting, the strap so deep its kissing his tank, stretching to the point where he feels like bursting, but no force in the universe is strong enough to pull him away from you. He begs for just one more empty overload or a few bucks from your hips, though you both know that neither of you is going anywhere until he passes out.

Ughhhh, I need him like this so bad

Dance dance

Commission for @andromedaprime 💕