Imagine Elita Suggesting A Threesome To Sentinel With Optimus. He Agrees But He Gets So Pissy. In His

Questions to ask beta readers

General:

Were you confused at any point of the story?

What genre would you say this book is?

When did you put the story down?

Is the ending satisfying?

If you had to cut 3 scenes what would they be?

When did you feel like the story really began?

What was the last book you read before this story?

Characters:

Do you get any of the characters names confused?

Which character is your favorite?

If you had to remove a character who would you and why? (you don't have to remove the character, just make sure their role is meaningful)

Which character do you relate to the most?

Which character do you relate to the least?

Do the characters feel real?

Are character relationships believable?

Are the goals clear and influence the plot?

Are the characters distinct (voice, motivations, etc)

Setting:

Which setting was clearest to you?

Which setting was the most memorable?

Am including enough/too much detail?

Plot and conflict:

Are the internal and external conflicts well defined for the main characters?

Are the internal conflicts and the external conflicts organic and believable?

Are there enough stakes?

Are the plot twists believable but still unexpected?

helpful sites for writers

i have a little collection of websites i tend to use for coming up with ideas, naming people or places, keeping clear visuals or logistics, writing basics about places i've never been to, and so on. i tend to do a lot of research, but sometimes you just need quick references, right? so i thought i'd share some of them!

Behind the Name; good for name meanings but also just random name ideas, regardless of meanings.

Fantasy Name Generator; this link goes to the town name generator, which i use most, but there are lots of silly/fun/good inspo generators on there!

Age Calculator; for remembering how old characters are in Y month in Z year. i use this constantly.

Height Comparison; i love this for the height visuals; does character A come up to character B's shoulder? are they a head taller? what does that look like, height-wise? the chart feature is great!

Child Development Guide; what can a (neurotypical, average) 5-year-old do at that age? this is a super handy quickguide for that, with the obviously huge caveat that children develop at different paces and this is not comprehensive or accurate for every child ever. i like it as a starting point, though!

Weather Spark; good for average temperatures and weather checking!

Green's Dictionary of Slang; good for looking up "would x say this?" or "what does this phrase mean in this context?" i love the timeline because it shows when the phrase was historically in use. this is english only, though; i dig a little harder for resources like this in other languages.

Don’t you just hate it when you’re trying to sell shit and you suddenly reveal your money kink to your client?

My only defense is that I love these fuckers, your Honor.

We need to talk about Orion Pax’s fat birthing hips in tfone. I bet D-16 was giving him that D in secret because it’s just so damn big and then it only got bigger when he got the matrix of leadership!

Megatron was definitely hate fucking him on the battlefield when everyone is looking, he can’t help it😔

Ooh and I bet you Orion loved it!

Orion waddling around with those fat birthing hips like it’s nobody’s business should be a crime!

D-16 isn’t really listening to what he says, man he doesn’t even care, all he wants is to shove his fat spike into his valve and make him a carrier, maybe they’ll even hive them time off to take care of their young.

Orion can only gasp into his hand as D rocks hard into him, slowly thrusting more roughly and faster, mixing their transfluid like cream. Poor Orion’s nods have never been massaged like this before and it doesn’t help that D’s fat spike just somehow keeps getting bigger!

Orion can’t help but squirt on his best friend, why should he not? He feels so good and full.

D is grabbing his hips, thrusting up into him as he practically shoves the head of his fat spike into Orion’s womb!

Orion snaps out of his overstimulated state and immediately begs his best friend not to overload in him. D is rocking his hips with a glare because how can he pull out now when he’s already there?!

His tip is leaking so much it might as well be an overload and Orion is begging and squirming for D to pull out, he feels so good full and doesn’t want to carry yet! D only pulls out because he heard one of the guards coming, just great now he’ll need to jack off in a room later to finish himself😒

Of course when they ho on that whole trip and everything changes, neither was happy, especially Megatron.

And when they do meet again, they’re fighting and hurting and while Optimus Prime is sad and whiny about fighting his best friend, meanwhile Megatron is trying so hard not to shoot a load into his panel because Optimus’s whiny and even fatter birthing hips have been swaying the entire time!, ‘stupid Prime knows that I’m getting hard and is doing it on purpose!’

Then one day Megatron just has enough and shoves him down mid battle, Prime is on his hands and knees, ready to kick Megatron in the stomach but instead his memory back up kicks in and his panel pops open.

Megatron with the biggest smirk you’ll ever see, shoves into his valve like it was any other Thursday and starts thrusting into him like a wild mech in heat! Everyone has either stopped to watch or is looking away in shame.

Ohhh but it only makes it better because it wasn’t only Megatron’s frame that grew bigger and Optimus can feel that! Megatron’s spike is right in his womb, he hasn’t even pushed in all the way! It feels so good, too good to notice the stares and the gasps. He’s whining for Megatron to pull out but he just keeps thrusting, massaging all his neglected nods.

Megatron is gasping out that he’s won! Declaring that they’re precious Prime doesn’t stand a chance against him!

Optimus is overstimulated and pumped to the brim with transfluid by the time Megatron is done.

Poor OP is so full and thinks it’s finally finished when Meg just holds him up and open for everyone to see and thrusts back into him, rubbing his belly and kissing his neck while massaging his hips because Meg has been waiting for the day he would finally full him up.

Who knows, the war stops entirely because OP ended up pregnant and now has to take care of him!

Maybe OP is asking Megatron to put in another one😏

Hehe hi I don't have enough coherent thoughts to really write more for mirage's heat properly but like 2 things:

1. Noah can stick his entire forearm up Mirage's valve and I think that drives both of them crazy for different reasons

2. At the peak of his heat, Mirage is overcome with the urge to bare his spark to Noah. Of course he knows there's no way he can spark merge with his boy, but that's not going to stop him. Between desperate pants he coaxes Noah climb onto him as he slides his chest plates open. When Noah finally dares to carefully sink his hands into the spark chamber, Mirage cries out in ecstacy. The blue energy of his spark twirls around Noah's fingers as the human dares to caress the orb presented to him. When Mirage finally overloads, Noah really Feels it. The solid pulse of energy that crackles out of Mirage's spark shoots through Noah's arms and through his frame- and for just a moment, he swears... he felt Mirage. The bot's consciousness brushed against his own and, in that moment, he shares the overwhelming pleasure and love coming from Mirage's very core. After all... the human brain runs on electrical impulses as well

Damn

Yes

YES ON THE HUMAN X TRANSFORMERS SPARKPLAY

So a while back I got some TFOne thoughts. Specifically considering that in TFOne Meg’s is the baby, and Star, Sound and Shock are all older. And with age, comes lots of experience…

So maybe one way or another - maybe it’s a comment Megs makes, or Megs going through his first ever heat - they find out that their new leader, is an innocent, bright opticed, blushing virgin. And Star brings the idea to Sound and Shock, that they should teach him. They can’t have a leader so inexperienced, so it’s their responsibility to prepare, and teach him…

So they drag him off, and they begin to gently work him, slowly convince him, after all, they’re just trying to help him, teach him, give him some experience, that’s their responsibility. And eventually they get him to let them start.

Star momentarily departs, tells Sound and Shock to keep going, and he’ll go prepare (make a little nest for them to be more comfortable doing it on), and handle the others to prevent any interruptions (make a polite, flowery announcement to tell the others to leave them alone for a while).

The pair work him, get him all flushed, and leaning against them, practically begging to go farther, and just then Star comes back, having decided he made an adequate nest for them to ‘teach’ their little leader.

They take him off to the nest, and settle down, quickly prepping him, and before long they’re already into the interfacing.

Soundwave and Shockwave have him sandwiched between them, spiking him, and Starscream is sat back, watching the show before him, somewhat servicing himself.

Megatron, despite being the largest, seems so tiny, when he’s on the pair’s spikes, which is so very interesting to Shockwave, he’s definitely going to need to test this again, and their newspark leader makes such pretty sounds, music to Sound and Star’s audials to hear.

They get to end, and as Megatron is drifting - because it was rather intense for such a sweet little thing, who’s never had any experience like that before - the three start to conspire between themselves a little.

One lesson definitely won’t do it. He’s gonna need some more experience to be ready to lead them. And they’re happy to teach.

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they get a rare day off and instead of resting or doing something productive dee ties orion up and reeeaaaaaally takes his time making orion fall apart for him

there's some edging, absolutely some overstimulation, dee fingers orion through enough overloads to make him cry before spiking him into a few more, and orion can only sit there and take it

after the fact, orion discovers he does in fact have a Thing for bondage. something about being restrained and helpless, at the whims and mercy of dee... he doesn't know what about it is doing it, but it's really revving him up

He wants to be restrained. He wants to be held down, restricted in his movements.

It gets him so reved up and wet for Dee. Dee can't help put take him. Again and again. Sometimes almost missing shifts because of the lovely moans he pulls from Orions mouth as he finger fucks him.

Or spikes him. Spilling his transfluid inside his forge. And locking his pannel to see it sometimes slipping free.

Elita is so done with them because she can see the pink of transfluid running down orions thigh. With you two stop fragging before work!?

uhmmm. mashing them together like barbie dolls

stop being clingy Orion!

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